I can hear that you like dubstep and tried to get some intelligent beats in it. Shame that the piano melody is awefull. You should have tried to get a better and more sounding melody in this. At 1,30 something the whole beat is blowed away by too much bass, this isn't really the meaning of dubstep. You can't hear any drums and hi-hats anymore. Your whole song gets vague, it's only a wall of sound. Better luck next time, try putting more time in it.
There are a few things I really like in this song:
The constant changing melody! It's so awesome, I can learn alot from you!
The basslines in this song, zomgs! :D
And that the whole song is getting more volume each 30 seconds, it gets more sounds and thats really cool (can't really explain that, too hard in english :P)
Lol I think I get the point bout the volume, the bass was pretty hard to make,fruity filter+parametric EQ 2+bass booster+compressor...
Good job mate! I like this one because of the mystic thing it has. The drums are awesome!
^_^ Happy to hear you liked the drums.. =O that was the hard part.
Thanks for all the support mate =D
With this song you really showed your growing, you really have the feeling for ambient man!
Awesome, Next step to master AMBIENCY >=]
As I already told you, I really like the song, mainly because of the feeling in it and the cool instruments :)
Haha thanks a bundle bro ^_^
Really good ambient song, I like the vocals, it's a bit creepy! Your improving very much now! Keep up the good work!
Im improving??? You my friend are improving much faster =P
not really industrial but cool!
This song is very ambient, but when the beat comes in, I would say industrial too
Very ambient, very good, nothing to add
-Main part 0:36-2:30
Sounds cool, I only miss:
A main, or louder melody, with a kind of different sound
nothing to add
Thanks for your review m8!
serious, why you do submit this? You add 2 sounds, some sort of vocal, call it goth song and think its good?
Things like this ruin the portal
here's what i think
The intro is very good, when the violin comes in it makes it perfect.
The saxophone is very good for your first time! This song is a really smooth and calm. I only miss some drums, but thats my taste!
p.s How far is team Lollasaurus?
Thanks for the review.
We're still only 2 parts in.
You make good music, and because I like some hard techno I like to review this one :P I don't make this hard songs myself, but this is what I miss
Nice Melody, I know the original from Scooter
It's a nice melody, but you don't really build up, what if you made the melody more simple, and then the full melody in the main part of the song, also, the kick is too early
I miss hi-hat/claps only kick wouldnt do it. There's only one melody, add a bass and some extra sounds.
Your outro is exactly the same as your intro, that's not the way it goes right? Try to make something what makes you think of scooter :P
Well, you want to edit something on the song now?
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