Joowna's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Melo Die]

Nice Try

I can hear that you like dubstep and tried to get some intelligent beats in it. Shame that the piano melody is awefull. You should have tried to get a better and more sounding melody in this. At 1,30 something the whole beat is blowed away by too much bass, this isn't really the meaning of dubstep. You can't hear any drums and hi-hats anymore. Your whole song gets vague, it's only a wall of sound. Better luck next time, try putting more time in it.

[Storms of Agony]

great dance!!!

There are a few things I really like in this song:

The constant changing melody! It's so awesome, I can learn alot from you!

The basslines in this song, zomgs! :D

And that the whole song is getting more volume each 30 seconds, it gets more sounds and thats really cool (can't really explain that, too hard in english :P)

Good job!

Shinrog responds:

Lol I think I get the point bout the volume, the bass was pretty hard to make,fruity filter+parametric EQ 2+bass booster+compressor...

[Desert Clash (DEMO)]

very good

Good job mate! I like this one because of the mystic thing it has. The drums are awesome!

Geigamg responds:

^_^ Happy to hear you liked the drums.. =O that was the hard part.

Thanks for all the support mate =D

[~:{DW}:~ Dank Urbanity]

very nice

With this song you really showed your growing, you really have the feeling for ambient man!

Geigamg responds:

Awesome, Next step to master AMBIENCY >=]

[~:{DW}:~ Celestia Arabia]

love it!

As I already told you, I really like the song, mainly because of the feeling in it and the cool instruments :)

Geigamg responds:

Haha thanks a bundle bro ^_^

[~:{DW}:~Dank Urbanity (Demo)]

Wowwa

Really good ambient song, I like the vocals, it's a bit creepy! Your improving very much now! Keep up the good work!

Geigamg responds:

Im improving??? You my friend are improving much faster =P

[Test Track #1]

not really industrial but cool!

This song is very ambient, but when the beat comes in, I would say industrial too

-Intro
Very ambient, very good, nothing to add
-Main part 0:36-2:30
Sounds cool, I only miss:
Harder Kick
More variation
A main, or louder melody, with a kind of different sound
-Outro
nothing to add

RealPublic responds:

Thanks for your review m8!

[The Death Combo]

this

serious, why you do submit this? You add 2 sounds, some sort of vocal, call it goth song and think its good?

Things like this ruin the portal

[+After the Fallout+]

here's what i think

The intro is very good, when the violin comes in it makes it perfect.
The saxophone is very good for your first time! This song is a really smooth and calm. I only miss some drums, but thats my taste!

p.s How far is team Lollasaurus?

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for the review.

We're still only 2 parts in.

[(DJ Martcore) Darkcore vibes]

yoo dude

You make good music, and because I like some hard techno I like to review this one :P I don't make this hard songs myself, but this is what I miss

Nice Melody, I know the original from Scooter

-Intro
It's a nice melody, but you don't really build up, what if you made the melody more simple, and then the full melody in the main part of the song, also, the kick is too early
-Main
I miss hi-hat/claps only kick wouldnt do it. There's only one melody, add a bass and some extra sounds.
-Outro
Your outro is exactly the same as your intro, that's not the way it goes right? Try to make something what makes you think of scooter :P

Well, you want to edit something on the song now?